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优点:读完了这部中篇小说,我脑海中顿时有四个字“纤纤如玉”,整个小说给人的感觉也是这样,很真实的触感。而且,整篇在心理描写和细微的情节描写上,非常出彩,很耐读,并且,也真实反映了一个群体的生活和心理状况,有一定的艺术水平。

缺点:一是故事核太老了,类似的故事层出不穷,仅是在描写上出彩;二,后半部分,描述性的文字过多,所谓尾大不掉,这一点处理的不是太好。

综合因素导致,发表的可能性为45%左右,已推荐《山西文学》小说版编辑陈克海老师,建议作者再自投到北京《十月》杂志社。该用户表示中立"); document.write("
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